Text Transformation 02.10.15

Text Transformation


 

The day in which they I had much success.  My brother is unable to gather the strength and power to outsmart the headmaster. In the past year I had no authority in this school how ever as the years have past I have built up my status and now have the power to overcome this evil headmaster. The three membership leaders have praised me much, however I am not sure if I can trust due to their position in this school. They referred to me as very intellectual but it may just be to entice me to join them. But I need to tell my partner, my brother Macbeth not to lose hope and happiness as I will conquer the headmaster. And to that I bid farewell and we must meet and speak again.

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  1. Hello Zeeshan,

    Are you writing this from the perspective of a teacher? It’s clear that you have taken on most of the meanings within the scene, however I have some questions to ask that I hope will help with developing ideas?

    – What problems might be posed by presenting us with a brother/sister relationship instead of a husband/wife relationship?
    – How might you come up with a better incarnation of the witches?
    – Is this meant to be a version of the soliloquy or the letter from Macbeth – there are some points where it is unclear.

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